Ni hao
Our class has been going swimming in Term three. We have learnt to float. Later we learnt to be safe around water by wearing life jackets and falling off boats safely. My favorite bit was when we got under the boat and used the air pocket because is was cozy and you couldn’t hear anything outside of it. We got to go in with big long clothes.
hello my name is Thomas I am from Mokoroa.
I like how you tell the reader what it feels like I have looked at lots of blogs and this is the first to say how it feels like so far!
next time maybe try to use more adjectives then big and long